Beautiful Chaos
I build these walls to safeguard my heart
For it pains to see people come and depart
Stubborn yet fragile they stand tall
Waiting to melt at your one single call…
Break those walls and enter into my heart
Live there forever and never do part
For you’re my sweetheart Adonis
The one I so fervently miss
To you I love , O my Eros
My heart is engulfed in a beautiful chaos.
-Raashi Hasteer
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Thanks dear ! 🙂
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very passionate
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Thank You 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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overwhelming!
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Thanks dear ! 🙂
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I really enjoyed reading this! (:
I too try my hand at poetry, and your feedback would be much appreciated.
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Thank You So Much !
I’d love reading your poems… 🙂
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Awesome
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Thank You So Much ! 🙂
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A wonderful pleas to love…come and tear down the walls and live in my heart…beautiful
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” Sometimes people put up walls not to keep others out but to see who cares enough to tear them down . ”
Thanks again , friend 🙂
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this is true…you are welcome, my friend 🙂
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Awesomee!!
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Thank You So Much ! 🙂
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This is so good
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Glad you liked it.. 🙂
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U r massively underrated. U should be appreciated more tbh. So am i :p
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So nice of you to say that.. But I feel happy with all the appreciation I get. Though I crave more and so do you 😛
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Haha yeah everyone does i guess :p i am happy with myself tho
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There are a lot of Urdu posts on your page. Wish I could comprehend them 😦
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Oh i can translate them for u 🙂
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Thank You! 🙂 I’d love to read …
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Alright. I will translate one ghazal a day and send it to you. Give me your mail or sth?
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raashihasteer@outlook.com
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Thank You So Much ! 🙂
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Mention not. Good morning
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Good morning to you too 🙂
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I sent u a mail 🙂
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Awesome.
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Thank you 🙂
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Welcome.
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